La Couchette

On a night train from Paris to Bourg-Saint-Maurice, Maxwell, an English doctor, settles into bunk 9E and tries to dormir in relative calm as the carriage wakes around him. His first disturbance comes from a loud, inebriated presence: a drunk, flatulent German named Jorg intrudes into bunk 9D, and the tense moment is only amplified when a laughing couple, Kath and Les, chooses to relocate themselves to bunk 9A, leaving Jorg to reclaim the bed he’s initially claimed. The air grows thick with awkward humor and uneasy glances as Maxwell closes the door on the shifting chaos.

Hours pass and a new arrival disrupts the uneasy order: Shona, an Australian backpacker, crosses the threshold and places her bag on bunk 9C before stepping out again. Maxwell’s quiet routine is briefly interrupted by the social dance of the other passengers, and Kath and Les, sharing a private joke, begin to loosen their clothes on the bed while the soft hum of the carriage glows with odd intimacy. Jorg’s earlier confusion subsides only after Maxwell translates, revealing a strange, comic malapropism of etiquette and language aboard a moving metal tube. With a swift shift, Jorg swaps to bunk 9F and Les climbs into 9D, further jumbling the sleeping arrangements and heightening the train’s claustrophobic atmosphere.

When dawn approaches, Shona reappears with companion Hugo, an English trustafarian who would rather linger in this carriage than in first class. The pair settle on 9C and trade travel tales over a can of Carling, trading flirtatious banter and a flirtation that seems quaintly out of place amid the mounting tension. Hugo’s open confession—he is ticketless—brings a jolt of reality to the scene as the conversation veers between humor and unease. A sudden movement from bunk 9B reveals a dead man, and the carriage erupts into a chorus of alarm and quick questions. Maxwell confirms the death, then leaves to search for a guard while the others confront the shock in their own way. In the confusion, a family photo found in the dead man’s pocket becomes a small, silent clue, and Jorg quietly suggests using the emergency stop button. The group debates the idea; Les even considers smashing the glass, but Hugo’s steady, if self-preserving, stance tempers the moment. The dead man’s body is tucked away into bunk 9B, and Hugo awkwardly occupies the same vicinity, a reminder of how the night’s events have spiraled into a moral morass. The carriage settles again, though the fear lingers, and Kath finds sleep hard to come by.

By morning, the routine fragments have grown heavier with each exchange. Les wakes Maxwell, only to discover Kath’s absence and the growing sense that something has gone wrong. The train brakes abruptly, jolting everyone awake just as Hugo and the corpse tumble to the floor from their awkward perch. Maxwell presumes that Kath has halted the train in an act of desperate resolve, while Jorg, in a moment of uneasy propriety, stands and lowers his trousers, a surreal tableau that sharpens the sense of danger. The scene becomes stranger still as Les finally admits his anxiety about the wedding and his own conscience begins to gnaw, and the group endures a bizarre moment when Jorg defecates into Kath’s shoebox, which Hugo holds in his hands. Shona, a keen observer, notices that the train has struck something on the tracks—a deer—before Kath returns to the car with uneasy calm.

As the day unfolds, Maxwell dresses and prepares to finish the journey, while Hugo re-enters wearing one of Shona’s T-shirts and reports that Jorg is cleaning himself. Kath and Les talk soberly about responsibility and the plan to attend the dead man’s funeral after the wedding. Shona and Hugo decide to leave the carriage together, drawn toward a future that seems uncertain but potentially hopeful. Maxwell, collecting himself for the next appointment, receives a call from his driver who is waiting for him along with Dr Meyer. The moment arrives when Maxwell turns toward the body and whispers that he is “terribly sorry,” followed by the stark, chilling admission that there can only be “one candidate.” As he speaks the name “Meyer,” Jorg, now crisply dressed, reveals himself as Dr Meyer, traveling to the same interview. He steps away from the carriage, and Maxwell is left to confront the devastating truth: he has murdered the wrong man.

In the quiet after the reveal, the story holds steady on the tension between fate, chance, and moral consequence. The train’s morning light spills across the carriage, illuminating a room that no longer feels safe or ordinary. The characters—each with their own private fears and ambitions—drift toward a fragile resolution: a wedding, a funeral, and a competition of identities that led to a grave mistake. The final image lingers on Maxwell’s face, a portrait of shock and remorse, as the realization settles in that a single misstep aboard a moving carriage can redefine a life in an instant.

Last Updated: October 03, 2025 at 06:45